I think the building conveys the spanish village better. Maybe it needs to be much more simple - the village/windows are a bit complex - simplify it. like the shapes of the hearts and like them floating out of the top.
The bottom right has a nice subtlety that implies how beloved you are, but not overtly. Either way, the bottom two are a better fit for "Spanish village."
the building it's nice but it's hard to know that's the village..from foreigner...thought it's jus a church?? i like the top right one as well!!! can it be different gesture? kinda get lost the sword and hand~
i like what you did to try and incorporate the hearts. I think that you are looking too small, maybe a more inclusive heart needs to be a framing element? i want beloved, like Togetherness, being united - as if they were all...inside a heart.
i seem to think that the buildings are too dense to be a logo for your name, however, they are lovely. i certainly enjoy the man on the horse with the hearts coming out of his head. good jorb
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top right definetely- it looks like a conquistador (probably spelled that wrong) and the heart is a cute touch. Love the top right.
I think the building conveys the spanish village better. Maybe it needs to be much more simple - the village/windows are a bit complex - simplify it. like the shapes of the hearts and like them floating out of the top.
The bottom right has a nice subtlety that implies how beloved you are, but not overtly. Either way, the bottom two are a better fit for "Spanish village."
the building it's nice but it's hard to know that's the village..from foreigner...thought it's jus a church??
i like the top right one as well!!! can it be different gesture? kinda get lost the sword and hand~
i like what you did to try and incorporate the hearts. I think that you are looking too small, maybe a more inclusive heart needs to be a framing element? i want beloved, like Togetherness, being united - as if they were all...inside a heart.
I like the way the hearts are used in the two on the right best.
lol. I just figured out how to read comments. Thanks for the input. I will keep them in mind.
i seem to think that the buildings are too dense to be a logo for your name, however, they are lovely. i certainly enjoy the man on the horse with the hearts coming out of his head. good jorb
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